Neil HFC wrote:Hull RLFC head coach Lee Radford to have his contract termnated
"His man management is none existent"
for starters, grammar & structure is shocking aswell, especially when you put it alonside the origial post on the letter to adam thread.
Oh dear, that's pretty lame, so instead of having a viewpoint about what the subject matter is your only beef is that I made a couple of grammatical errors in the early of the morning?
Well, for starters I had already edited the word terminated before any signatures had been attached, my old keyboard is a bit dicky and tends to miss letters out from time to time not that it's any concern of yours, that the change.org site didn't catch my edit when it's clear in the title that the word is correct isn't down to me.
Yeah, you got me on the 'none', but aside from that there's nothing inherrently incorrect in my grammar. Oh, aside from the fact I wanted to use ellipses but I missed a single period off twice, so yes, my grammar wasn't absolutely pin-point perfect
Compare it to whatever and the grammar isn't shocking but crack on, I'm sure you can enlighten me with your full run down & line by line explanation as to how my peition fails so massively to get the message across and of course from a grammar POV.
Crack on McDuff